"To her, he is beautiful."
Characters: Justin Bieber, Original Character (female)
Genre: Fluff, Romance
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618 Read Count: 6518
hey. im avery. i'm a big justin bieber fan, and i also like to write. so, why not put my skills to use on here. even though i have little skills. i don't know how good my writing is, so i need you guys to read my stories and review them.... that would be amazing. and if you have questions for me or about my stories, review :)
"To her, he is beautiful."
i really liked this..... i was sweet
i just wanted to say your story is AMAZING! thank you for writing it. i look for updates every day.
awwwwwwwweh i loved that.
lmao "do you have any beer?"
What had once been a silly little bet between two eighteen year olds was now something entirely real.
While she was shy with guys, he was outgoing with girls. While she thought he couldn't date a girl for thirty days, he was determined to prove her wrong.
i dont think i'd change anything. i really liked it. i think this is a really cute story. and i wish you'd update more often. but i can't complain cause i rearely update my stories.
These are way longer than I'm used too since I'm from Youtube and a chapter is no more than like 400 words? But I'll try to update sooner because I know how much people are enjoying this story! :)
loved it !
A girl named Amy starts a new school after her parents get a divorce. She soon finds herself a victom of bullying by a boy named Justin Bieber and friends. Will she put them striaght or let them walk all over her?
uhh. how did she meet this kaylee girl. and i dont get why justin's being like abusive and theres only four chapter to your story so far........ instead of building up it was just like BAM
you know I was just reading it over and I got confused myself lol, I haven't finished yet because I've been busy but this is my first ever story, I've never wrote a story before so can you bare with me pleaseee, htnaks for the review :)
Molly Fraser is your average outcast. When her best friend since she was 4 left her when he got signed to a record label she was left with noone. Now she sits alone and does her best to avoid her enemy Layla Gordons.
But what happens when Justin comes back and is desperate to be friends?
When it's time for you to come back down to
Where you started, but we parted.
I think you'll find that it is very hard to face
this chapter made me cry at the end. loving this story :)
aaaaw bubba <£
thankyouu :) <3
oh my goodness. im so sad it's over. this chapter def. made me cry. you're an amazing writer and i cant wait till the next one. i loved how it ended though, as much as anyone could love an ending. this story was perfect :)
aaaw bubba <3
aaw thankyouu :) it's out now :) it's called Lexi :)
aaw you're so sweet :) thankyaa :) <33
aww i wanna be a super cool CIA member!! haha please? and thank you?
Just PM me and I will! :D
love this story sooo much! if you published books, id buy them. even if they weren't about justin bieber.
Awww!!! Well, thanks!! I'll be sure to tell you if I do. :D
I am in love with this story!!! I don't know when the las. Time you updated is cause I only found it 2 days ago, but there better be a sequel miss!!!
i really really love this story and i hope they get back together. but it would be cute if tally and charlie got together first. i like charlie
I thinking about getting Charlie and her together at some point soon but I'm not 100% taken with the idea yet.
We'll wait and see!
Thank you for your review :) <3
ooooo. charlie asked her on a date thingy! yay haha
Yep he did but what will Krystal say? :)
Glad you're happy about it!
Thank you for reviewing :)<3
yay. im so happy they're talking again. i think that maybe... and this is just an idea... but i think that justin should like be sleeping over with ryan and alice and he should sneak into krystals room when they fall asleep and they should stay up talking all night long and fall asleep in each others arms or something. that's just what i picture. but i definitely want to next chapter soon.
Well your idea is sort of what I've got in mind funnily enough!! Just minus Alice and Ryan and I don't know if they'll fall asleep in each others arms or not yet but they will be staying up talking. Just depends how scared I make Krystal of Atlanta thunder storms. I'm gonna make them scarier than British ones so she might need comforting and JB might be the only one there to offer it ;D
Not sure yet but all will be revealed in the next chapter, which might actually be up soon because I'm getting ahead with other work that needs done!
Thank you so much for reviewing and sharing your ideas with me because it shows how into the story you are, which is awesome. :)<3
love it so much
Aww good I'm glad! xD
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)<3
YAY times like a zillion!
ive been waiting for you to say something like that
I know a lot of readers have told me they should like have an affair and I've point blank refused but now I'm thinking 'Hell they need to have an affair!'
It'll just liven things up a little!
Thank you for giving me your answer,
sooo your story is legit the best ive ever read. love everything about it. and even though it takes you a while to update, its worth it when i read it. i get so excited and read it till im done no matter how late it is. this story is like a drug. <3<3<3<3 you have real talent. i'd totally buy this haha
In the words of the legend that is Usher OhMyGosh!!
Whoa thank you so so much!
I love when I find a story that is addictive and to hear [well read technically] that you're addicted to this is just like whoa because I never ever thought something I started during a very long boring summer holiday for some fun would end up being like it is. I never in a million years imagined the first one would end up 66 chapters and I never in a billion years thought I'd be writing a sequel because I half expected people to hate it. I'd never thought of myself as creative or a story writer but there we go!
It's nice of you to say I have a real talent and make me feel appreciated because the chapters don't just happen in a day a lot of the time. It sometimes takes me two or three days to get a chapter right and others do happen in a day if I get a lot of inspiration! So if chapters come up quickly I've been inspired if not then I'm brainstorming to get a good chapter!!
So Thank You SOSOSO much for this review it's the nicest I've ever recieved and it's also the 100th review on this story so an extra thanks for that! If you can't already tell I'm grateful!
Much love sent your way :D ♥♥♥
just to let you know... its not boring... its amazing. every bit of it. cant wait for more. and since they're gonna be exceptionally good to you, they'll be even more amazing to me.
and thank you for writing this!!
Thank you, it's nice to get told the opposite to what I think because it's a positive you're telling me!
I love the fact you think they'll be even more amazing and I hope they will be!
And it was no problem writing the note because there's nothing worse than waiting for a new chapter for ages and wondering what's taking so long and then when it's up the author is like 'Oh I had writers block' and I know people understand but I like to keep everyone up to date with where I'm at when I'm thinking up ideas.
The new chapters will be up by end of Monday, UK because today in two free hours I had on my hands I managed to plan out plot lines for 7 new chapters so over Friday, Saturday and Sunday I'll be writing the first two so I can post them Monday for you to read.
Thank you so much for supporting me and the story, I appreciate it so much, much love :)<3
can i just say i am in LOVE with your story. i love krystal and justin's characters, and the plot and everything. i think this is the most perfect amazing story i've read on here. and when it ends someday i will be so sad, and you'll have to write another one. also, i love how justin and krystal are getting so close again. i think they're so cute together and perfect for eachother. what gonna happen with jessica though? haha. and are they going on tour again soon? im soooo hyped to see what the next leg of the tour will bring for their relationship, since they can't be as close probably.
wow, i feel like im writing a novel on here haha. but i just can't help it. this story is so amazing! thank you for being such a great writer and creating a story that's so perfect. i love love love LOVe it soo sooo sooo sooo much. haha. i probalby sound crazy, but oh well.
thank you again!!!! <3 <3 :D
Wow I think we can safely say this review is the BEST I've EVER received!
Thank you so much for all the praise you've just heaped onto me, it makes me feel so much happier than I have been all day!
I know when it ends I'm gonna have nothing to do in my spare time so I might just develop a new one but I dunno there's still quite a lot to do with Krystal and Justin. I'm so glad you like their characters in this because when I first started writing it was always a worry that people wouldn't like my characters.
Well you ask what's gonna happen with Jessica and you will find out in good time because I already know what I want to happen to her, I've got the idea firmly cemented in my head.
Tour will be upon them in around three chapters I'm thinking coz I'm bored of the whole Canada shizzam thing coz I'm running outta ideas for it but I've got one I'm sticking to and unfortunately you might hate me for it but in the long run it'll be better!
On tour you're right they're not gonna be able to be as close, for eg bed sharing, but they will still be close, I've got a few ideas for closeness and stuff that will totally piss Jessica off :P I'm looking forward to pissing Jessica off to the point of no return!
Oh and for reference you don't sound crazy, it's nice to know how much of an interest you're taking and it helps inspire and push me forward to get the next chapter up for you coz I know you're waiting. If I have something to aim for things get done quicker.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR A LOVELY REVIEW!! LOVE IT! :D:D:D:D:D <3<3<3
asdfjasghor!! that was amazing! i don't even know what to say. that was like one of my favorite chapters yet. i dont know why. i just loved it so so much!!!
=] Awww Yey!
I love how you find it so hard to explain why and say something about it. Ha I made somebody speechless with my writing. Woot ;) Haha no but seriously, you might not have said much apart from that you loved it so much but that has got to be a big compliment in itself really. So thank you <3
Thank you so much for reviewing,
jfalvngnovnovnvlvnsl! they kissed! actually they made out!! AHHHHHHH! i absolutely loved this chapter. you have no idea. more more more more more more more more!
Haha yeah they made out; stupid teenagers ;)
Okay so did you just love this chapter coz they kissed? Haha I should've written that in sooner if more people love when they kiss.
More will be up ASAP but don't get your hopes up about their relationship, not totally sure what's gonna happen next.
Thanks for reviewing,
I am sooooo happy to have you back!! I missed you writing! And i mossed tally and justin! It seems as if its been forever! Im going to be distraught when this story ends :( this is the one i check for everyday
I'm so happy to be back! I missed doing the writing about Tally and Justin!
It really does seem like forever since I wrote before these last few chapters and I have absolutely loved writing them because this is what I've been wanting to write since like February!
Don't panic about being distraught yet! This has a little to go yet before I wrap this up. Then, are you ready honest you better be ready, I'm gonna do a sequel to it because there's still a lot I can write for them. I mean JB's gotta tour the rest of the world and Tal is gonna dance and maybe a few other things. So they need to juggle their relationship and see if it can last with their hectic schedules.
Aww bless, the story I check for every day is Dark Blue and it's gonna end soon so I totally know how you feel!
I'm not sure when I'll get the next one up because today I'm with my parents, sister and grandparents celebrating me finishing 1st year of uni and celebrating my sister finishing her GCSE's. Then tomorrow my best friend is coming to stay for a while so I'm gonna be busy with her, but I will have time on evenings I expect so I'll try to write in that time. It will be a longer wait than this week, but shorter than the wait from when I was on teaching practice. Like a week tops I hope!
Thank you so much for reviewing,
Sequel to 'Ego'
Molly and Justin had been through so much together and nothing sounded better to them than getting married.
What lies ahead for the unusual pair?
and will the stress of engagement and marriage wreck the relationship for good?
You know i care for you, You know that i'll be true
You know that i won't lie, you know that i will try
to be your Everything
you know that feeling you get in the pit of your stomach when you're really excited and nervous at the same time? i just got that feeling reading this chapter.
im so happy you decided to continue the story of justin and molly. the lexi one didnt grab my attention like this one.