Date: 05/25/11 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
Bieber sure knows how to swoon the ladies ;)
I've read all the way up to here, and I really like this story!
Sian is a great, very well developed character, and it was enjoyable to read!
I entered your contest,
this is my story .. From Where You Are
hey thanks for the good review :)
Date: 04/10/11 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think it's really good!! Sometimes when the chapters are short it gives you time to right more chapters. Like if you make the chapters extremely long then you might only have like 4 chapters. Keep writing!
finally a good review thanks x
Date: 04/10/11 - 09:19 am Title: Chapter 6
It's good and chill out about the pages thing. Some of my chapters are only 600 something words. It's okay...
yeah the reason why i am mad is because i did excatly the same story but only the chapters were about that size and i had reviews telling me to make them longer so i deleted it and restarted i'm just annoyed that they don't even base it on what i am writing