Date: 05/03/11 - 05:45 am Title: Wake-Up
awh!!! that is soo sad!!! buuut, i've got to say, i really liked it...especially the ending. you did really good with giving details--there wasn't soo much detail that i felt all sick and queasy and stuff, but then again, there was enough detail so that i could still picture what was happening really vividly. yeahh...not sure if that made any sense, buuut hopefully, it did. hahaa...great job!!! ")
haha it made sense! thanks so much for your honest thoughts Im glad you liked it:)
Date: 04/29/11 - 07:11 pm Title: Wake-Up
Good one shot, pretty sad though.
But you're a good writer.
Date: 04/28/11 - 11:54 am Title: Wake-Up
AWWWWWWW :(:(:(:(:(:(:( I hate bad endings but that was really good!!!! You should probably wanna make it a little loonger with more detail like how they got into an accident! :)
Please read my story Friends 4 Ever and review&rate because you responded to my challenge! :):):)
Date: 04/26/11 - 06:48 pm Title: Wake-Up
I really liked this(: I liked how you put a lot of detail into the story. I admit I got a little teary eyed at the end. You should continue this into a full story(: Please read & review my story that I have started(:
thank you so much! I might continue it.still thinking about it..haha :) and Ill read&review your story <3
Date: 04/15/11 - 05:34 pm Title: Wake-Up
DUDE!!! This is intense!! And very descriptive! Excellent work! VERY excellent work!! You said this isn't your best? Then your best must be amazing! No joke!! Wow!
Thanks for responding to the challenge and reviewing Somebody to Love! Meant alot!!! Great piece here! :)))
ahah aww thanks!:) im prob not that great but thanks for your review, it means a lot!! <3 and np your story is amazing!