Date: 12/17/10 - 10:07 pm Title: Planning
To be honest, when I first started this story, I was skepticlal... Justin as a juvenile delinquent, really?! HOW UNBELIEVABLE. HAHA. But, you've proved me wrong! I really like this! Definitely different from a lot of others out there.
Don't worry about this chapter, it's actually a nice idea. You can update readers with something (as I'm sure everyone is impatient, haha), but also not spend time with details in your next one!
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Date: 12/12/10 - 11:32 am Title: Luck, Guilt, and "It's Not Okay"
YAY! New chapter! :)
I loved when Tavia just stopped and stared at Justin. Sometimes you just gotta appreciate the beauty in front of you, hahaha. But, seriously. One of the first thing I notice about guys are their eyes. So, I loved your the description of Justin's eyes. :)
Justin has beautiful eyes. I've never had the opportunity to see them up close so I made a bit of the description up! haha, thanks for reviewing! :]
Date: 12/12/10 - 12:21 am Title: Luck, Guilt, and "It's Not Okay"
i reallly like this story ! :']
i first read it today, and yeah ! i reaally really like it ! :D
update soon ?
I hope to update soon! If school gets cancelled tomorrow I will definately write another chapter. It's pretty snowy here so...let's hope! haha
Date: 11/26/10 - 03:30 pm Title: The First Visit
this is a different realationship , a good one though
and how do u pronounce her last name , i was trying to figure it out of like 20 minutes???
It's prounounced ''luh-FEVR'' or "Luh-fev-Ur''. At one time it was prounounced as 'lef-eb-ray' but this is incorrect. "luh-FEVR" is the correct prounounciation. :] Thanks for your comment! :]