Date: 12/23/12 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Her mom's a bitch. I want to throw her off a fucking bridge right now. I am pissed at her.
Poor Justin, poor Pattie, poor Allie, poor...I don't even know anymore.
Am I fast reader or what? Just look at the time between this review and the other. I am a superhero.
Oh, sorry about that.
I was wondering, where is Allie's father? You mentioned him but did I miss something on the past chapters? I'M JUST CURIOUS.
But anyways, I'll be keeping an eye on your story. Once you get all 5 of the promised reviews doesn't mean I'll stop reading your story. YOUR STORY IS THE SHIT.
You have impressed me a lot and I'm a little picky when it comes to reading.
Overall, I love your story so far.
Thanksss & I said Allie's father is always on business trips. c: but he will come into the story soon, more towards the end though. ♥
Date: 12/23/12 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Nawww, aren't they cute? :"> This story's getting quite interesting! I'm going to casually click on the NEXT button and continue my adventure towards pure awesomeness. ;)
(I'm sorry if my promised review took so long. School's been a bitch.)
Date: 12/09/12 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN LIKE TWO WEEKS. URRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGH GOOOD STORY THOUGH. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
sdkfjnsk I know & I'm sorry omg. I don't have as much time as I used to anymore cuz my school moved me to an advanced class & now I have to study & keep my grades high. But anyway, I'm gonna update asap! This story wont really be put on hold. Glad you like it so far tho. ♥
Date: 12/01/12 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Her mom needs to just jump off a cliff. Maybe i should do it :) But anyways, thanks for entering in my challenge. The funny thing is that i already had this story tracked, which i found funny. It's not really but thanks anyways and i cant wait for the next chapterr! :)
Date: 11/28/12 - 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is amazing so far, I'm tracking it now :-) I like how she's being rebellious and he's helping her, that's sweet! Anyway please update soon, can't wait to read more X
Thank you so much for reading! Chapter 5 will be up asap♥
Date: 11/28/12 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter 4
Your story is honestly amazing, the chapters had me giggling and I love a story that incorporates such humour! I love her reaction at the beginning with the whole oral sex situation hehe. I adore the plot, it's one I'm the aficionado of, and I admire all the characters in this! I wasn't expecting that to be the reason for Justin leaving, it's so unique! Usually people go for the whole attitude adjustment scenario so I praise you on the individuality! :) All those little compliments from Justin were so asdfghjkl, I would have been redder than a tomato! D: I love that you are always giving us an insight into what Allie is thinking, it's another unique point to your story :) Her mum irritates me even though she has good intentions I guess, oh Lord my mum tries to get me out of the house all of the time, she thinks I have no friends if not and she says I need to make mistakes haha, she gives me too much freedom and responsibilty! Anyways enough about my mother, I absolutely adore this story! It's amazing and you'er such a meticulous writer. Keep up the astounding writing skills and I will definitely be tracking this :) I'd also love your opinion on my story "Credulous" <3
akjadnkj Thank you so much. ♥ This made me smile like a chesire cat tbh. :3 & Lol my dad does the same thing to me, he tries to get me outta the house all the time but I'm just socially awkward. Anyway, thanks again & I will be reading your story now. ♥
Date: 11/26/12 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 1
ASDFGHJKL. Can I borrow a second from your life to tell you that, this story is so awesome I don't want to stop reading! I laughed when Justin picked up the bra, lol. That was hilarious. Awee, they're so cute :">
sdkfnjsdk can i borrow a second from your life to tell you that you're awesome & i love you? Thank you for reading. ♥
Date: 11/25/12 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
Omg i really like this story.
i was laughing at the part when he was wiping her off and it looked like he was about to go diwn on her.
Then she was like it takes a dirty minf to know one.
UPDATE SOON LOVE?
Lol thank you ♥ Chapter 4 will be up soon. c:
Date: 11/25/12 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Lol what the hell was that.
But this was great and a little crazy but I liked it I'm tracking it because I want to know what's going to happen next.
Lol I thought it was kinda crazy too but thank you ♥
Date: 11/25/12 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
i adore this already and it's only 3 chapters in, wow!
definately one of the best on here!
update this flawless story xo
ksjdnf really? I love you omg. Thank you so much. I'm glad you like the story so far♥ Chapter 4 will be up asap! c: