Date: 10/25/12 - 10:58 pm Title: I'VE MADE UP MY MIND
awww i really liked this story.
and i used to make sure to leave a review in all your chapters :c
Aw, and I'm very thankful for that! Seriously! But I feel like it took too much of my time to keep posting this story when only a few people appreciated it...
But thank you so much!! <3
Date: 10/05/12 - 06:20 am Title: Chapter 27 - YOU WHAT!?
You may have to wait a few days or even weeks for the next chapter... my motivation is totally gone and i'm waiting for an email from the JBFF team but stay tuned.
Don't stop tracking.
It will be up later.
Date: 09/22/12 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Guess One Time
I was just wondering how you did you Banner? It's so cool! Love this story
If you read at the very bottom of my summary it says that the banner is made by "fallenangel08", so I don't know how it was made but you shall ask her!
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 09/18/12 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter 25 - I Left My Heart In Hawaii
I LOVE THIS STORY I AM HOOKED
THEY DONT TALK FOR SOEMTIME BUT THEY MEET ACCIDENTLY LATER ON
YOUR GRAMMAR IS PERFECT:D <3
AHHH, thank you hun! :)
So happy you're excited about it!
Next friday i'll put up the next chapter.
Thanks for your suggestion btw, might use that idea.
Date: 09/16/12 - 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 25 - I Left My Heart In Hawaii
OMG!!!! JUSTINS ON THE PLANE! :D
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!
Haha omg, so happy that you're excited to read the next chapter!
Check back next friday! :)
Date: 09/16/12 - 04:06 am Title: Chapter 2 - Hello Hawaii!
The chapter was good. Just space out your dialouges and add feelings or something so it won't seem to be boring.
“Can I have it, please?” I pleaded for the shirt. I need to have it!!!!
“No, we need to hurry.” she said sternly, rolling her eyes as she tugged my wrist.
“Come on? It’s only $15,32 . Please?” I pleaded once again, detaching my wrist from her grasp.
Sighing, she rolled her eyes and gave up. “Alright but you have no time to try it on.” she checked the time and rolled her eyes again.
“Got it.” I said with enthusiasm as I grabbed the shirt. My mom pulled her Chanel wallet and paid the cashier.
^Just like that
There were some errors too but they weren't that major. I hope to see improvements on the 26th chapter.
Knives and Kisses,
Thank you for taking you time and giving me constructive criticism!
It really helps me!
Yup, I think I've made some improvements and I'd love if you kept reading my story and then tell me what you think! :)
Date: 09/16/12 - 03:35 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Day
It was fine. The dialouges need to space out since I got really confused on who was speaking. Add more emotion on the dialouges and on the character's side, I guess you have to add more biref information. That is all.
Knives and Kisses,
Alright, thank you!
I've gotten that before and if you continue reading the story it gets better, promise!
Date: 09/15/12 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 25 - I Left My Heart In Hawaii
This story is soo unique. I mean there is no story on this site like this. Lol, and could you please check out my story? And maybe review? Anyways, the grammar and punctuation for the story is the epitome of perfect!! I can't believe that you're second language is Spanish! Haha. Well, I hope you check out my story "Household Drama" . Thanks and bye for now!!
Thank you so much!!
To hear that it's unique really is a big compliment because that's what I want it to be.
I don't know if you meant to write "english" but yeah, it's my second language.
Glad you can't tell that much though lol.
Sure, I'll check it out now!
Date: 09/07/12 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Who Wouldn't Wanna Kiss You?
your grammar is very good :)
cant wait for the next chapter.!
cant wait to see what happens... are they going to see each toher again?
Thank you! :)
Well, I don't want to give anything away but you'll see in the next chapter!
Date: 09/06/12 - 11:38 am Title: Chapter 23 - I'm Sure They Can Wait
From my challenge:
THIS STORY IS SO GOOD OMG I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Omg, thank youu!
It's so exciting to get new readers!
Thank you so much for taking your time to read my story!
Next chapter will be up in a few minutes! :)
Date: 08/31/12 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 23 - I'm Sure They Can Wait
looove it :D
omg. whats gonna happen with justin and catalina? :)
Hmm... guess you'll have to wait and see ;)
I think i've got some plans.
Check back next Friday and find out! :)