Date: 07/20/12 - 12:40 am Title: Prologue
This story is definitely worth continuing (: I absolutely adored it! I can't believe that people could be that cruel to Eden when she didn't even do anything wrong.. Like she seems like a perfectly normal girl to me minus the Natalie thing :p lol I mean I don't like how she has someone in her mind.. Because at the end of the day it just makes her seem crazy... (: haha anyways.. I really loved it and I can't wait to read the next chapter love <3 <3 trill
Date: 07/19/12 - 11:33 am Title: Prologue
I love the name Eden! it's so different becasue all i'm reading now is like Avery as the main girls name, i like Eden!
omg. that was so intense.. omg i wanted to hit stephanie! when she was saying about her parents, and eventhough she's.. as you've described anorexic.... still callingher fat, that's a disgrace.
i love the alter ego side, because it makes the whole anorexic part seem legitimate, like a reason to keep going, to be like natalie! and ot's totally different! i can't wait to read more!!!!!
i don't know where you're going to go with this but i'm very excited!! :)
if you could take the time to read, and if you like it, review a chapter of my story Ella it would mean a lot:)))X
Same! I love it so much I wish that was my name :')
I kind of based Stephanie on all the people that have bullies me when I was younger up till recently. As crazy as it sounds someone has said similar stuff to me. Like when I was younger and my nan died, a I was obviously upset and this girl told everyone that I was crazy and told everyone that my nan died when I didn't want anyone to know., I'm not anorexic and my parents haven't died but I did get bullied for my weight when I was younger and a lot of that has affected me later on. And I feel like I can relate to Eden because I know how it feels to want to prove people wrong.
So the reason I'm telling you all this is because I wrote this story for everyone who has ever felt like they aren't good enough, or have been put down by other people. I'm basically trying to say that I think you're beautiful and someone else out there is going to think so too! So have faith in little things and stay strong!
Date: 07/19/12 - 10:34 am Title: Prologue
I'm actually really curious aboutt this story! I can't wait to see how Justin plays into this! :) continue love! Can you review my story, 'Everything happens for a reason' please :) Chapter 6 please! Thanks! 'Thrill'!
I have alot of plans and I can't wait to post them! Will do ❤
Date: 07/19/12 - 09:54 am Title: Prologue
This is great! I wish you had more chapters soooo bad! I'm so upset, haha.
Your grammer and spelling is on point and you should definitley continue!
Keep it up! I'm tracking.
Please review my story Sold.
I actually wrote the first chapter before I wrote the prologue but it was a but spacey so I thought it would be clearer to do an introduction :') I'm updating hopefully soon! I just came back from Spain, then I had prom and the. I'm going away again tomorrow! So I'll probably write while I'm away :')
OMG NORMALLY THAT'S MY WORSE POINT :')
Thansks - and will do
Date: 07/10/12 - 08:29 am Title: Prologue
Sorry that it took me forever to respond to your review on my story but I fell asleep and didn't have time to come online before school.
I love how you've written yourfirst chapter. I think the style of your writing is beautiful I also love the plot of your story. I can't wait to read more and to see how Justin teaches her how to love. I can imagine it being sweet as hell.
OMG! thank you so much :')
this is legit my face right now:
Date: 07/09/12 - 11:04 pm Title: Prologue
THE BANNER IS DONE! Your probably gonna think it sucks...
I know you wanted the beach theme and pastel and stuff and I know! But I didn't see that until after I got done. IM SORRY! You don't have to use this if you don't want to. Sorry again. :'(
AHHHH I LOVE IT! THANK YOU! ❤
Date: 07/09/12 - 06:28 pm Title: Prologue
Hmm. I dont know how i feel about this chapter, its interesting.. Ill continue reading :) keep writing. Youre great at it love.. X
feel for for any constructive critisim! thanks for being honest.
thank you! :3
Date: 07/09/12 - 04:49 pm Title: Prologue
Please continue! I love this! Also, I'll do the banner if you'd like(:
thank you :3 REALLY?! that would be amazing! do you have an email or something so i can tell you what sort of stuff i would like? <3