Date: 11/03/12 - 08:35 pm Title: Goodmorning
I only started reading this story a few weeks ago and I waited forever for an update wonderin of you was actually going to even continue writing and I am so glad I waited, I was so happy to see that you had posted another chapter and even though it was short I know now that you will actually be updating so I will wait for whenever you post as long as it takes and as long as I know you will keep posting I will keep waiting for new chapters xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 11/03/12 - 03:39 pm Title: Goodmorning
It has been a really long time but glad to see you back! And I don't mind the length I'm just glad there was finally an update and hopefully you continue to keep going on with the story :) Stay beautiful and until next time! :)
Date: 07/24/12 - 02:44 am Title: Rated R
god job i'm not going to comment much on the scene becuase that would seem rather weird jsut to say it seemed real enough so yeah the restaurant lol i love the fact that pattie noticed they were flirting its just so hilarious!
p.s. that scene should keep some of the sex wanting people happy for a bit!
Date: 07/23/12 - 06:13 am Title: Rated R
Hmm weird I never saw that last chapter in my update thing well anyways onto the review. The chapter was quite good I definitely enjoyed the scene for your first one it was good. Maybe I could write one out for you but I haven't really written one before at least not yet though I'm quite the imaginative person lmao. Plotwise the story didn't progress much it was ok a little dinner and some romanticism, I find their mother's character quite humorous definitely brings something different to the table. I'd kinda like to see some drama maybe Justin does something he shouldn't do or maybe some new character comes between them and causes some trouble and tries to get Derek making Justin jealous and think he's trying to take him away. Anyways keep up the great work and can't wait for your next update :)
Date: 07/20/12 - 09:11 pm Title: No funny bussiness
Yay I'm soooo happy Patty accepted them:)
Here are my ideas:
1. They NEED to have sex;)
2. Maybe they could tell the rest of the family that they are a couple and a family member isn't happy about that and they say something mean
3. Maybe Derek and Justin could have a little fight like couples do once in a while
Date: 07/20/12 - 05:53 am Title: No funny bussiness
yayyyyyyy. I love that patties okay but lets see what happen if scooter comes roundto wake up justin and discovers this (hinty hint ;) ) v good chapter and im gald theyre back i love pattie shes hillarious and then justin's little laugh about it and pattie inturupting lol thaat was great!
Date: 07/19/12 - 09:14 pm Title: No funny bussiness
hey just a suggestion maybe you should write the next chapter in Pattie's point of view and talk about how she is dealing with it I mean finding out your two sons are gay and dating each other and just stuff like that. Do you get what I am saying?