Date: 09/29/12 - 02:47 pm Title: Emma Cantrell.
Okay, first off, it's very rare that i do an R4R and find a good story out of it,
and when i do i'm literally soso happy!
THIS is definitely a story that is going to my tracking list.
The name Seleste Chevlair is so pretty! It's original and elegant, I actually love it :)
Any story i've read with Jason McCann has always had the typical 'drunk dad' but this one is his Grandpa, which is oddly nice to read :)
I honestly like the way you have started this story and i'll be tracking it to continue reading.
Keep it up!<3
Date: 09/04/12 - 10:14 pm Title: Josh Burke.(Part 2)
Your grammar is flawless, you don't bunch up your paragraphs which is another good thing.
Thank you for entering my challenge.
I don't usually read stories based on movies or books, but this is really really good.
Date: 09/03/12 - 03:41 pm Title: Jack Louis.(Part 3)
OMG you finnally updated! This is probably the most original stories I've ever read. The only thing stopping you from becoming a really big author is that you can't commit too writing this amazing story. I promise if you would keep updating and stop leaving your readers hanging this story would do amazingly well and I would be a loyal reviewer :,) PLEASE GURL LOVE YA