Date: 10/21/13 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter 24
you changed your banner oooh i'm feeling it!
but the fact that this story doesnt have more reviews is annoying the heck out of me like hello some stories with crappy unoriginal plots are getting reviewed but your story deserves it so much more!
your characterisation is on point and the plot is actually so original
hold tight started playing when i got to the sex scene part lol talk about setting the scene damn
so excited for your next chapter!
Thank you for the new review! It means a lot! Haha and I wasn't too sure about how I wrote this chapter but, I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I changed my banner and stuff. Ten times more reads from doing it haha :) Alright, thanks again! Hope to see another review soon :) ByeXx
Date: 10/17/13 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter 23
HI I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH!!!
No offense, but I judged your story on your banner, and I really regret it because it's amazing!
You deserve so many more reviews than you have and the number really doesn't do your story justice and i'm so glad i clicked on it!
THIS. CHAPTER. THOUGH.
SO INTENSE AND FREAKING JASON IN THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER WHEN HE'S PISSED ABOUT BLAIRE BEING TAKEN AWAY LIKE I CAN JUST IMAGINE HIS FACE OMGGG
I actually love their small gestures they share like the whole gun taking and his arm when they sit down it's actually so adorable like i want that! hahahaha
they're like a married couple they just haven't realised it omg their relationship is so wack but i love it they're so amazing omgggg
OH ALMOST FORGOT WHEN BLAIRE FREAKING TOLD MICHAEL LIKE IT IS HELL YEAH GIRL WORK THAT
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCHHHH I CAN'T EVEN DEAL WITH THISSS UGGHGHHGHGHGHGH OKAY
I'M KEEEN FOR THE NEXT UPDATE OKAY
Thank you for your thoughts! I had been actually planning to change the banner for a long time knowing that the banner looked amature and not inviting like all those profesional ones out there. I just did, and I hope it looks better then the other. Well, I know it looks better than the other. Anything is an improvement from that. Just saying.
Thank you so much though! I love reviews like this. I miss the long ones :)
Date: 04/13/12 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hey, This is really good :) I love the story line :D But you should spell check or something.. Idk if you already do but you have a lot of spelling and grammatical errors sometimes... Not neccasarily in this chapter but yeah.. :) Sorry wasn't trying to be rude or mean but I'm a super grammer nerd haha. Anyways.. Do you have a twitter or anything because I usually read from my iPod and am too lazy to come on the computer just to review so having your twitter or something so I could review more often would be really cool :) Cause I know how much I love getting reviews and I'm sure you like getting them too... Can't wait till the next chapter, kay bye!! :)
Yes I have a twitter lol :0 and sorry for the grammer and spelling errors... lol my twitter is @kitkat61397 if you need it :) thanks :)
Date: 04/05/12 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love this!(: Just one thing tho, you say 'seen' when you're supposed to say 'saw' but its so good! Please update soon<3
Damn, I always make stupid grammer mistakes :/ lol sorry :) I will try better about that. Well, anyways thanks for reading :)