Date: 01/23/13 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 35
Way to much grammar mistakes.
Plot line isn't going anywhere.
Your story is just a disgrace.
And seriously? Text talk really?
Please listening more in English or Language arts but your story is not working for me.
Date: 06/29/12 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 30
OH MY GAMMIT :O that was.. unexpected >.< well then lol uhm heyy could u do me a favor and read my story : Dream Come True-- More Like Nightmare? : yeah ik its a long title but could u? PLz?? id be very grateful :P thx luvv
Id love to!
Comment the link and ill check it out<3!