Date: 02/20/12 - 10:41 am Title: O8
okay, here is the long and honest review:
The thing I really like about this story is the originality and the fact that Justin and she dislike each other. I always hate it when they like fall in love immediately and everything's good and that's the end. Luckily that's not the case with your story :) Your story is also very well written, I love how you describe everything precisely and how your story is very detailed!
There's only one thing, the fact that you write when people say something like this: "Hi there," is a little distracting, I'd advice you to write that normal, just like the rest, if you get what I mean? lol :)
But the rest of your story is beyond awesome, I really don't understand why it doesn't have more reviews!
Well, keep up the good work babe!
thankyou so muchh!
and yeah, i get what you meann, :)
Date: 02/14/12 - 11:32 am Title: O7
awww i love ryan in this story <3
and i hope that dick garett isn't going to visit her on tour. but i have a feeling he is?
i know me too:)
We'll just have to find out what happens in the next chapterrr;)
Date: 02/13/12 - 05:11 pm Title: O1
when i read the summary, i was expecting her crime to be something petty, like theft or fighting or something .. but, murder? wowwww. this is amazing! 10 stars, plus i'm going to read the rest and track ;)
This was a response to your review for review post,
you can find my story here - http://justinbieberfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=23909&warning=3
thank you so muchh!
i'll go read and review your story right now !
thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/13/12 - 03:58 pm Title: O7
jahsbanklmal i love love lovedddddd this chapter! and :o ryan's got the hots for olivia? ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu i smell drama! loved this chapter and cant wait for the next one :D
&yerpp, drama's on the wayyyy.
next one sooon :)