Date: 05/03/13 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my gosh i love this series so much...
i miss it. i look up to your writing it's absolutely perfect.
both stories just make me cry...their relationship was perfect and i hated brady and selena the whole thing was just so perfect!
not to mention im pretty much obsessed with all the songs you used in it.
i cannot go a day by without reading this
i love it so much its so beautiful i cannot even use words.
well i can but it would be too hard.
in the sequel i swear my heart broke for justin when he found out lyla would be going to australia or whatever with brady! her loss!
but i just wanted to tell you i miss this series so much and its beautiful its so well written and the characters are perfect along with the plot along with everything else
its by far my favorite series on here. it tops danger, even dark blue which was my favorite forever until i found this series.
i miss this.
thank you so much! i'm so sorry its taken me so long to respond, and i know this is way overdue, but i found myself not wriitng for a while, but i think i'm going to come back to it! (:
seriously, your compliments made my day, you don't even know. i'm so glad that you love my writing!
and i love that you like the music! gahh, that totally makes my LIFE!
THANK YOU SOSOSOSOSO MUCH
Date: 03/19/13 - 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Omgggg this story is sooo amazing.
I am soo obsessed with it your soo talented woooww so good
There is a sequel?? I am going to read it and tracking it like right know
Besides i am from germany so you have here over a fann
thank you thank you thank you! i'm sorry its taken so long for me to respond but i stopped writing for a while. I might start writing again, but i'm not so sure! thanks for the review!
Date: 12/13/12 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 30
Holy shit. This chapter was so intense and emotional it made me cry! I'm so sad that this story has ended but happy that there's a sequel!
Thank you so much for submitting your story to my challenge and giving me a chance of discovering this amazing story! You're an amazing and talented writer and you should never stop writing. :)
OMG! really?! aww! yayay! not that you were crying but that you got into this story so much!
i hope to hear from you on the sequel! your reviews made my day and i am so glad that you liked this story so much!
Date: 12/13/12 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 27
Oh my god. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for some chapters! I was too captivated to know what's coming next! :o And I most certainly did not expect this to happen; especially from Justin! AH drama! But love it as always!
OMG. don't worry about it! i'm soo grateful that you reviewed at ALL!
i cannot thank you enough!
Date: 12/11/12 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter 13
First of all, I AM SO GLAD SHE CHOSE BRADY! I mean I fully support Jyla but the story has to be interesting right? ;)
Second, SELENA IS A BITCH. Fully support Selena but she is one in this story! haha can't believe she told the media he cheated on Lyla! :o
meeee tooo! i personally, am still on team brady! but that's cause the real one has my heart <3
hahahhahah! jk. well kind of. not really actually. i'm pretty serious.
THANKS for the review!
Date: 12/11/12 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 10
This was a really cute chapter c':
I'm really enjoying your story so far! Thank you for submitting your story! If you haven't, it would've taken me a while or never to read your story! :)
thank you for reading it! i'm sOOOOOO glad that you liked it as much as you did! (:
Date: 12/10/12 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
I am in love with your story. Honestly, you're an amazing writer!
& as I have mentioned before, your plot is so different from those other cliche ex boyfriend/girlfriend jealousy stories! LOVE IT.
thank you thank you thank you!
that means so much to me!
Date: 12/10/12 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww this was such a cute chapter! I like that you don't just make both of the characters fall in love with each other right away; like how Justin said "wanted" and used past tense struck Lyla and i think that's really refreshing, since most stories would go as Justin confessing his love right away. :)
thank youuu! and i try to make this as realistic as possible! life, especially like there's, is too crazy for things to happen like that!
thanks for the review!
Date: 12/10/12 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
I started reading this story cause you submitted it for my challenge and so far, i love your story! It's original in its own way and it's really well written :) absolutely love it!
aww! YAY! i'm so glad that you like it!
thank you so much!
Date: 11/16/12 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter 30
Okay. I'm crying. Seriously, crying.
I know I just found this story tonight when you submitted to my other accounts challenge, but I'm really sad. I got attached, slowly watching the reviews go from 316 to 346... it's crazy.
I really wanted them to get back together, it really sucks they didn't.. But I'm happy with the results. Can't wait to read the sequel!!
hahaha! aww! well yay for being emotionally involved!
you'll have to read the sequel to figure out how all of this played out!
thanks again SO FREAKING MUCH for reviewing every single chapter! in my new story, funny the way it is, (i'm too lazy to link it) i'll defs give you a shoutout! i got so excited when i saw all these reviews and i'm so glad that you took the time to review!
thank you, thank you, thank you! i hope to hear from you on the sequel, Today!
Date: 11/16/12 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 29
This is probably one of the best almost endings I've ever read. The way the letters to Olivia and Justin were written were absolutely flawless. Your writing style is just phenomenal. I honestly don't think I've read a story on here that compares to how this one has effected me.. I even teared up in some places haha.
By the way, I meant to say on the last chapter - totally proud of Pattie!!
OMG. thanks so much! that means a lot to me because i worked so hard on perfecting this!
i'm glad that you like it so much! my writing style is kind of different, or at least i'd like to think it is, but a lot of you have seemd to take a liking to it!
once again, you are the best for reviewing all of these!
Date: 11/16/12 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter 28
I don't feel bad for him at all lol. He's such an asshole, that was so beyond unneccessary. I'm glad he finally caught onto what happened at the beach that day though.
I can't believe she just left like that. I mean I guess I understand, but you'd think after working for something she'd be a little more hesitant to leave. She talked about being unsure but she still just picked up and left lol.
karma's a bitch!
and i think she had to leave to just figure things out, you know? sometimes thats all you can do!
thanks for the review!
Date: 11/16/12 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter 27
Oh no.. I don't even know what to say. I invested so much in their relationship lol I'm not understanding why he's being such an asshole.. no..
I'm now officially #TEAMBRADY lo
#TEAMBRADY for life! hahahah!
i love that kid! in real life and in this story! (:
thanks for the review, love!
Date: 11/16/12 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter 26
I cannot even fathom what I just read.
I thought I cheated myself by reading the summary for the sequel but I did not expect this at ALL. Oh my god.
I can't believe Justin would do that to her! Why?! She wasn't wrong, he was! No way. No. Fucking. Way.
yeah. there's always surprises!
and i know! it's a messed up thing for him to do!
Date: 11/16/12 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 25
I had a guess.. and then, I was on your user page to look for the sequel just so I had it opened... and I read the description... and now I know what happened :( Hmph. I'm so disappointed in myself lol.
I wanna see how their conversation goes. I love that you stuck with the cliff hangers all through-out the story though.
haha, yeahhh... that may have ruined it, but theres still more!
thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/16/12 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter 24
THERE'S A SEQUEL? AH.
I feel so bad for her. Justin just doesn't understand :( Brady is seriously probably one of the nicest fanfic guys ever. I just don't understand. I'd hate to be in that position because he's totally friendzoned, but jeeze.
Oh, I meant to ask earlier - you wake board don't you? lol
YAYAYAY! of course! justin and lyla are NOT done!
and maybe brady deserves a JBFFA nomination? mayyyybe!
yes! i do! of course! hahah, i live on the lake with my dad in the summer and every other weekend! it's my life and my favorite place in the world! i learned how to when i was six (i'm 17) so it's a pretty big part of my life!
thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/16/12 - 01:35 am Title: Chapter 23
I hate that she keeps crying :(
I can't believe Justin's with Selena. I just can't. He didn't even give her a chance to explain! Urg.
I'm glad her and Brady talked about things though, even though they're faking a relationship, I'm happy that it wasn't like a friendship ender.
(I'd just like to mention that I made a THG reference earlier in one of my reviews and now it's in the story! lol)
its frustrating isn't it?
hahah, right?! i laughed when i saw the review earlier!
Date: 11/16/12 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter 22
I'm in disbelief lol. I should've known something like this was gonna happen :(
I couldn't believe Justin agreed! And then of course she'd figure out that her and Brady don't have anything! :/
I'm just so ugh. UGHGLAGJERLGKRJ.
I only have a few chapters left </3
): you'll see! but i think there's a lot more going on between brady and lyla than you think! (:
thanks for reading and reviewing!