Date: 11/01/11 - 12:31 pm Title: Ch3 - The Phone Call That Ruined Everything
Now that's a creepy dream. LOL
And I'll answer your questions:
1. Well, since the story is based in school and teen romance, I say he shouldn't be. I haven't read much non-famous Justin stories before.
And if Justin was famous, then he couldn't go to that school.
2. I'd be happy to. You can just go to my Profile and contact me for any more info or anything. I don't need to be a chracter though, but if you're looking, then feel free to. :)
3. Definatly. The story just started and now it's intresting. And its awesome because it's based off of a movie! I'm totally tracking.
Date: 11/01/11 - 12:19 pm Title: Ch2 - The Golden Rule
Haha, I love to watch SNL, but half of it isn't really funny...
And that song was just like Friday by Rebecca Black.
'The song is so bad that it's so good.'
That song was stuck in my head for like, months.
But its just so catchy.
And I love how Patrick Blake is Jake T Austin. Love that boy.
Date: 11/01/11 - 12:11 pm Title: Ch1- Meeting Max
I never actually seen the movie, Easy A, but I heard that it's a good movie.
I know what it's about though, so this story will be very intresting.
Right now, I can tell there will be humour in this.
And I also agree with Penelope. I'm reading Romeo and Juliet right now, and it is so boring.
But my teacher is trying to make it fun.
Date: 11/01/11 - 07:02 am Title: Ch3 - The Phone Call That Ruined Everything
2. can i please be her like her best friend have bown hair brown eyes and same skin tone as rihanna and my name is spencer or you can change it for the story. please and thank you
3. hell yes you should continue haha cant wait for next chapter
Date: 11/01/11 - 03:08 am Title: Ch2 - The Golden Rule
Hola! :) This is a great start to your story :D I wasn't expecting Seth to say she kissed another guy :O I was expecting her getting caught, because karma comes back around ;) BUT WHAT!? Where did the whole you kissed Patrick come from !? :S
I hope you update soon :) Keep an eye out for more reviews from me! And LMAO I love The Lonely Island :3
Date: 10/31/11 - 06:20 pm Title: Ch1- Meeting Max
Penelope that's a cool name ;) I love the movie Easy A, so I can't wait to see what you do with this story!! I want a gay beat friend *sigh* xxxx
review my story now please I entered your challenge :) xxxx
Date: 10/31/11 - 03:37 pm Title: Ch2 - The Golden Rule
... You want an honest review? ...
Here we go: I'm not liking htis story. It seems so... not thought out. We're meeting to many people in two chapters, and have no set up. You said this was based off of Easy A, but I see absolutly noting corresponding except Seth's parents. To be honest, I don't think I'll read it again.
Sorry, maybe if you plan it out more. Also, the sentences are very choppy.
"I made my way to my rusty blue locker. I put in the code. I got my books. I felt someone's presence." Something long those lines was the first few sentences... See the not there flow?
You just need to work on writing consictenccy and plot.
Author's Response: When I first read this I was like "That little bit bitch" but later on I noticed that your actually helping me out. Thank you for your critics so much,it will help me improve on my story and plus other people wouldn't of told me what you said since they just want Their reviews :P Oh and one more thing,the story is inspired by "Easy A",it's not exactly meant to be like the film since people will get bored and they would know what will happen. But it will kinda will get like the film though.... Anyways thank you so much :D
Date: 10/31/11 - 12:12 pm Title: Ch1- Meeting Max
Hey, so I came across your challenge.
So, since you'll be giving 10 reviews, I'll also give 10 reviews.
I'll review 10 of your chapters once they come up. I promise.
But right now, I'm sort of busy so I can't start reviewing until later.
So, I'll start the reviews later.
This review won't count, so in total, I'm giving you 11 reviews.
Do we have a deal? 10 for 10?
I promise I will get to your story.
For sure :D Deal *Virtuly shaking hands*
For sure :D Deal *Virtuly shaking hands*