Date: 10/25/11 - 03:43 am Title: One
I heart this story, the plot, the O/C, the EVERYTHING!
Your style of writing is just amazing, I like the suspense and the air of mystery surrounding Ronnie and the two murders.
I also really liked the way Ronnie isn't drop dead gorgeous or suicidal, those type of stories are way too phony and can sometimes verge on being way too unrealistic.
The cliff hanger was what really got me going, way to keep readers interested; I know that I want to keep reading!
When I saw the whole, the coffin is too light therefore the body is not inside and I'm going to dig it out. I was like WHOA?!
Nancy Drew much!
Update soon,I'd love to see where this story will go!
You really like it? Oh my gosh! Thanks.
And I hate those stories too.
They're all 'the most gorgeous girl in the school' and 'secretly wanting to kill themselves'.
Originally, there was no cliff hanger there and I'd just continue writing until kingdom come (or, the one shot was so long that I'd just die).
That part took me ages to think up, in fact, the whole plot line did..
What's Nancy Drew?
Date: 10/24/11 - 02:49 pm Title: One
First one to read, and review your new story, oh yeah (:
THIS IS SO CUTE CHAZZY!! I lovvvve it (:
Update again soon? Pwease? (:
P.S. I think I'm going to try and reply to your email... If I don't get distracted...
OH MY GOSH CLOIE! HEY! I MISS YOU!
I will update soon, I pinky promise this time!