Date: 10/23/11 - 06:12 am Title: Chapter 18- Rose
It caught me pretty off guard when Justin proposed. D:
lol i had that idea once but i didn't write it haha (just wanna share)
I adore this one! I suggest when it comes to the drama scenes, you should be able to put an impact on the reader! So it leaves a mark on them! Then they'll come back reading for more! :D
So far, the story is really great! Add more twists! :*
Aww thank you! It's coming to the end of the story and I'm planning two twists:) I'm posting the next chapter NOW!! Hehe, so when you see this it will be up!!
Date: 10/19/11 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1- One Dream Come True
I like the plot of ur story! Its very unique and cute! He only adjustment I would make is instread of having everything in he dead center, maybe I have some paragraphs to spice things up! :) other than That it was faaantastic!
Thank you! I will try and spice things up, but I had a bit of writer's block:L Wasn't sure of what to do so if you have any idea's be free to tell me!!!<3
Date: 10/19/11 - 10:21 am Title: Chapter 16- 7 Days Left
FINALLY! I'm through all 16 Chapters!(:
So now, here's your honest review since yours on mine was very helpful, thank you for that(: I hope I improved through that:D
Anywho, to your story,
One word, AMAZING.
You said it's your first story, right? I can tell you, my first story I ever wrote was complete crap :D So I gotta say, you're a really and I mean really good writer(:
As I read your review I kinda sorta knew that this story will be good, but I didn't expect it to be THAT good :o I was impressed(:
Uh, what else to say? Oh yeah, I feel sorry for Chaz :D He should get someone too :P
And I found it quite funny how you brought in a pirate-looking guy :D I imagnined the flying dutchman from spongebob, y'know :D
Sooo, I'll keep checking back, I already tracked(: & if you could, please check back on mine, but only if you want (:
Awww thank you so much!! And of course I shall check back to yours!!<3
Date: 10/18/11 - 08:04 am Title: Chapter 2- Favourite Day
Wow. Its great so far btw for the summary ...maybe something like.... " I was just a nobody, until i met him." just to start it off . something like that is this about chaz or justin? ehh so far its about chaz so.
Carry on reading 'till the end, it's sort of about both but you know, hard to explain ahaa! More about Justin soon;)
Date: 10/18/11 - 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1- One Dream Come True
OMG THATS AMAZING!!! YOU HAVE A REAL TALENT THAT WOULD BE A DREAAAAMMMMM COME TRUUEEEEEE!!!! OMG.
What do you mean by 'You have a real talent that would be a dream come true!omg.??' I don't get it ahaa but thanks:)
Date: 10/18/11 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter 10- The Business Man: Elliott
I laughed so hard at thay Selena part, even though I'm a fan! hahahahahahah
i love this, NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE
Hahaa, I have nothing against Selena, I'm a fan too but I was like, where shall he get the wig from..Ahaa Selena!;D And thank you!
Date: 10/17/11 - 09:31 am Title: Chapter 3- It Was Just The Kiss
Just read two more chapters. And I love love love it! :)
Yay thank you! I've been reading yours today hahaa, it's really good! I just think it's so cute how Justin is the one with the crush and that he's the main character and not the girl:)
Date: 10/17/11 - 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1- One Dream Come True
Okay so I saw your challenge and thought I'd responde :)
I've just read the first chapter and honestly, I really enjoyed it! <3
I'm gonna turn onto the next chapter and continue reading. I'm probably going to track when I come to the end if the story isn't finished!
Date: 10/15/11 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 9- The Poodle
This was really great!
I've been reading this since this morning haha, every now an again coming back to read more.
You're a very talented writer and I'd love to write a collab story with you, if you was up for that? we could talk more about it if you're up for the idea
please could you check out my story an leave a review if you can? thank you! <3
Aww thank you!! And yeah I'd love to collab! Ahaa! And yes, I'll read and review yours before bed:)<3
Date: 10/12/11 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1- One Dream Come True
Cliffhanger. thank you very much. :D I hate that :D
Anyways, I really love the idea of the story and I think that the first chapter is really well written. Great job!
I have to go to school now but maybe I'll read the other chapters later if I have some free time.
Keep it up, gurl!
xoxox Lenyii <3
You think so? Thanks!:D<3
Date: 10/07/11 - 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1- One Dream Come True
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Sorry! Ive made it shorter! I thought it would have an automatic character count and tell me if I went over it!!