Date: 10/26/11 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 20- Hello
Oh my God! This is seriously one of the best endings I have read. I loved how he said hello instead of goodbye. I never thought of that before. So cute.
This story is seriously incredible though. Action and romance are always good together.
And if you would like to improve, try adding a little bit more detail to explain something. In the other chapters, you should space it out like you did in Chapter 19 & 20. And maybe go back to fix some spelling mistakes and add missed words.
Im not saying the writings bad. It was great. This is just to help you out in the future.
Thanks for the small deal we made. It was a pleasure reviewing for you.
Keep up the fantastic work on future stories , possibly the sequel to this story. But only if you have time and want to do it.
If you need any help with anything or on stories, just contact me. Im always there to help.
Lots of Love,
Thank you thank you thank you soo much for everything!
Thanks for the fantastic feedback and honest review! I appreciate it loads!!
Date: 10/26/11 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 18- Rose
Should Sophie and Justin get back together or not?
Well, I think Justin should apologize to her first.
But I don't think they should.
Should Sophie just get together with Chaz?
Yeah, Chaz had dibs on her, and loved her first.
It's only fair.
Should Justin hate Chaz? Or maybe the question is...Does Justin hate Chaz?
I think Justin hates Chaz right now, since he kissed Sophie.
Will Justin ever forgive Sophie, or will Sophie have to leave without one goodbye?
I think Justin should forgive her. It wasn't her fault. She didn't want to hurt Chaz' feelings.
Do you think what Sophie did was wrong? Who's fault is it? What should they do?
I think it was wrong since she was dating Justin, but it wasn't really her fault. It was Chaz'. And I don't know what should do? Forget about it?
Date: 10/26/11 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 16- 7 Days Left
SO ADORABLE! I just love the things Justin says or does for Sophie.
He's just so sweet.
And I am glad Pattie and Jeremy accepted Sophie.
This one's like the best chapter, even if all the other chapters are awesome :D
Date: 10/26/11 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 15- Sunset
The beach scene was so romantic. I have always wanted to do that too.
I think Justin and Sohpie make a cute couple.
And I think it was a little too early to see each other in the nude...
Sort of a little awkward since he's 17 and she's 15.
But anyway, this is a cute chapter. I loved it! <3
Date: 10/26/11 - 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1- One Dream Come True
NO JOPHIE IS OVER! I'm practically crying. You HAVE to write a sequel or I will come into your house and murder you. Just kidding, just kidding. But please please please write a sequel!
Aaw I'm really glad you liked it:) Hopefully I will write a sequel soon but in the meantime feel free to check out my other two new stories:)<3
Date: 10/26/11 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 11- Chaz Has A Plan
I think Chaz's plan will work and Justin will find them running or something.
Elliott might do more things to Sophie if they dont escape in time.
And i dont know what Chaz's plan will be. Maybe he'll take the guns and make their kidnappers free them.
Ill review more tonight. :D
Yay:) Thank you so much for the reviews! It really does mean a lot to me!<3
Date: 10/24/11 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 5- Faking It
I think she should have told the truth, then Chaz would know shes an honest girl. But at least they had a great time on their small date.
I gotta sleep now so ill start reviewing again tomorrow. I have to review 15 more times :)
Aaaw, thanks so much so far:) And when I was writing it, it was really hard thinking whether maybe she should just go for Chaz haha!<3
Date: 10/24/11 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 3- It Was Just The Kiss
Oh no. I hope Chaz doesn't find out what they're going. He's going to be really upset if he finds out Sophie was kissing Justin.
But at least drama will kick in. That's always interesting.
Now I think Sophie has 2 boys who like her.
Lucky girl. :)