Date: 09/21/11 - 04:35 pm Title: Oh, that smile!
really good love where you heading with this you should make them heaps longer though.
Review my story :) http://justinbieberfanfiction.com/viewuser.php?uid=14084
Author's Response: Ok thank youu! <3
Date: 09/20/11 - 06:42 pm Title: Meeting the Oh-So-Important boyfriend
Hey hey! I saw you entered my Challenge. I really do like these stories. They're unique to me.
Your story is going great so far, but the chapters are kinda short. To get more reviews, you need to add more detail and drama in chapter, making it longer and adding in those evil cliffhangers. You will start to get there. Don't worry. :)
I will continue to read to see how well you're doing.
Just dont rush on chapters. Do what you can.
I appericiate your time.
Thank you very much.
~ Jessica. =)
Author's Response: Thank you for the advice :) It really means alot <3