Date: 02/25/13 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter E l e v e n.
and while you're at it, is it possible to make that baby that girl had not Justin's? Lol Plot twist!! ahaha.
That's harsh, but I feel like he had a one night than some girl ended up pregnant, and he and the babies mom fall in love and are going to live happily ever after. Really?! I know it can happen, but there needs to be some drama in the mix. Why can't that baby not be his? Yea it's going to hurt Justin a lot, but it would make him realize a lot.
Date: 02/23/13 - 07:40 pm Title: Chapter E l e v e n.
WHEN R U GONNA UPDATE!!?!?!
Date: 09/15/12 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter E l e v e n.
Where are you?
This has always been one of my favorite stories to read. So I really hope you decide to update it soon. I'd really love to see it finished.
I still don't want that little girl to be Justin's lol. That's horrible I know, but some how I kind of want a twist. Like Chole turn out to that crazy jealous girl, that has no trust in Justin. That yes Justin slept with but she didn't know who that dad was but picked Justin because she didn't want to think admit the other guy could be the dad. Some big twist like that. It would be sad too because Justin's raising the little girl as his own, then to find out she's not his. Heartbreaking. So But it would be such a great twist.
To find out he was lied to all this time. To find out that he could have saved his relaionship with Rose he would have fought for her, and Chole wouldn't have made up such a lie. At the same time I don't think Rose should have been so stubborn either, she should have stayed around to see if the kid was really Justin's. I'd LOVE to see that happen, it's a big twist plus it's shocking.
Update again soon please <333333
Date: 08/29/12 - 08:36 am Title: Chapter E l e v e n.
Lol i am in love with this story!! I dont know about Rose trusting Justin again but yeah... i think Justin has changed :) and in have no idea why but i seriously think that jesse (i think that was the little girls name :P) is not Justin's daughter, i dont know why, i just really dont lol but update soon lovely, your writin and this story is flawless! :)
Stay beautiful <3