Date: 08/01/11 - 05:05 pm Title: The Meeting
I love your writing style so much. I wouldn't be surprised to see your name on bookshelves in the future!
I'm so hooked to this story, I check everyday to see if you updated. (I know that sound creepy, but it's true. LOL)
I can't wait for the next update!
so i could consider you a "fan" then?
and awesome. i love you so much (no homo)...
and i'll update asap. <3
Date: 08/01/11 - 03:24 pm Title: The Meeting
Chaz, this chapter was amazing! Without a doubt, it's definitely one of the best stories I've ever read. (It isn't saying much. I don't read often.) But this story has caught my attention, and I'm loving every chapter that you have written.
Oh, and I took Cloie to get those glasses today. They looked devine.
Please continue. I want to see if Justin is still speechless in the next chapter. LOL (Laugh out loud, in case you didn't know.)
-Carollyn Morgan ♥
Date: 08/01/11 - 03:17 pm Title: The Meeting
(My mother will be reviewing in a minute, don't worry...)
Is it bad to say that I'm already in love with this story? Like, legit, I love it. Even if it weren't my name, it's so well written, I would've loved it anyways.
Well, Chaz, you never fail to amaze me with your should-be-in-a-novel writing. I'm serious. You're writing can be detailed at times, but just vague enough to catch my attention. It's truly fantastic.
Oh, and yeah, I do come here often ;) I check this story everyday to see if you've updated. I'm obsessed.
Well... Update. Now. Slave, haha :)
Date: 07/31/11 - 11:25 am Title: Four and Thirteen.
So my daughter doesn't believe in love now? Well, I guess you learn something new everyday. But I wonder if Aedan knows...
Anyway, you described her perfectly! And, once again, your writing was magnificent. Perfect spelling, and punctuation. You even spelled my name right, which doesn't happen often.
Coincidentally, one of sisters' names is Jean. Well actually Catheryn Jean, but she goes by Jean.
You had Glow nailed to a tee, and you even pointed out things I've never noticed about her before. It was spectacular.
Add another chapter soon, please. You've got me hooked!
-Carollyn Morgan ♥
haha, no ma'am.
thank you. and really? i must be physcic or something. yeah, i can't spell that word - everybody makes mistakes, right?
Date: 07/24/11 - 08:52 am Title: Four and Thirteen.
amazingg! :D moree <33 and ahah aw, thankyou for putting me in xD
Date: 07/22/11 - 10:58 am Title: Four and Thirteen.
Your writting skills are amazing.
It's different which makes me attach to it even more.
Oh well, it was worth a shot! You know what they say, "You never know unless you try."
I'm glad you went with your instincts and chose Cloie instead of choosing at random.
I'm so excited to see what you have planned for the story!
i genuinely belive you're going to LOVE the role I chose for you.
and, thank you, you really make my day.
and i have a lot planned actually, its not going to be your average run of the mill story, but it has to have some cheese factor in it.
thank you for reading and taking your time to review <3
Date: 07/21/11 - 11:42 am Title: Carside Coffee
I. Hate. You. Your writing is so outstanding, and mine is just average. Your writing is dazzling, and magnificent. It wow's me everytime I read it.
Remember Betty. Okay, got it. I'll remember Betty, the 86-year-old cook. Grandmotherly. Why do I need to remember Betty, exactly?
Please, please post again. I'm begging. Please (:
oh well i love you too Cloie.
im not dazzling, im not magnificent.
oh and she's VERY important.
Date: 07/21/11 - 11:32 am Title: Pirgh
Why are you such a fantastic writer, Chaz? It's not fair that you are so spectacularly great at what you do. Your writing... It's better than some published authors. I swear.
I'm breathless while I read your stories. My mouth is agape. I am just so stunned at how amazing your writing is.
I'm not sure what else to say, since I sent you an email already, describing myself for Justin's love interest.
Please, post again soon. I cannot wait to see where you plan to take this story.
you know, you're such a confidence boost.
i actually love you. i'm going to consider you my favourite.. "fan".
other than my mom, but i kinda have to say that about her.
i plan to take this story a long way actually
and i got your email, i spent hours reading it to memorize it. wait, that makes me sound a stalker. i take that back
much love xxx
Date: 07/20/11 - 01:32 am Title: Pirgh
You my friend, have a gift! And I'm not just saying that. It would be an HONOR to be the main girl in this amazing story! Again, I'm not just saying that. Haha.
Your name: Adrienne Neal Salinas (Origin: French, Description: Dark, Rich)
Your description: I have long and wavy jet black hair that ends at my stomach (Similar to Kendall Jenner) light mocha colored skin, hazel eyes, pink and full lips, long and thick eyelashes, 5'3", and a decent body (Hourglass shape) I'm verrrry shy. I like it when people start conversations with me. But once I get to know you, I probably won't shut up and never run out of anything to say. I'm optimistic. I'm always laughing and having a smile on my face. I'm a hopeless romantic and I tend to fall hard. At times, I can be lazy and procrastinate but most of the time, I like getting things done and out of the way so that I won't have to worry about it in the future. I like to joke around a lot but I can be very serious when needed. I like making people laugh with my awkward rapping skills...not even kidding. I'm very friendly. I'm near-sighted, I mostly wear my glasses for school purposes. I tend to over-analyzes things sometimes. I'm very impatient, I'm a trustworthy person and I'm not afraid to tell the truth. I'm really fragile and clumsy.
Your interests: Well, I love to dance. Mainly tap dancing and hip hop. I love reading too. I can probably finish a whole book in a day. I'm not much of a writer. I tend to loose focus while writing chapters for my stories. Hence, never finishing my stories. I like mesmerizing lyrics to songs. I feel like a beast when I'm rapping to a Nicki Minaj song, or any other song. I know that sounds weird, but it's true! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE Ariana Grande and Jessie J. They're probably my inspirations (Including Justin). Also, I love photography, drawing, listening to music, and baking. I'm not really athletic, to be honest. But the only sports that I'd do is Track and Field and Swimming.
Anything else I need to know about you: My birthday is on Dec. 4, I'm Filipino, and I'm from California! w00t w0000t!1!!~ (Sorry, how childish of me) Haha!
My apologies if this is too much information. But hey, the more info, the better!
Date: 07/19/11 - 03:05 pm Title: Carside Coffee
ohhhhh thats an Awesome, Amazing story soo farr. and i cant wait for the next chapter :)
ohhh i wanna be a characte in a story i never have been before.
Full Name: Milyn MArie Bryan (my first name is pronounced My-lynn) it came from my parents names Michael and Linda.
Description: i have brown hair that reaches the middle of my back. i have dark brown eyes (i kno boring right i wish i had like blue eyes or something but oh well) anyways im like 5'3 and average weight. i can be shy when i frist meet someone but after like a hour with them i get outgoing and hyper. im hyper anytime im with my friends. i forgive people really easily. i dont really get mad cause i hate fighting and i like it when people get along. i act like a kid a lot of the time but i kno when to be serious.
Interests: i love to ride dirtbikes and watch dirtbike races. i like drawing but im not the best. i love sports like any sport but i can only play baseball i suck at the others. umm i love the lakers(basketball), chargers(football), and padres(baseball). i like reading but not twilight its justr not my thing. i like to bake but not cook. i listen to music like all day. i listen to country, rock, hip hop, pop, rap, metal, classic rock. my most favorite band is aerosmith but my favorits singer would have to justin bieber. oh i like marine biology study of marine life. i love sharks they are so cool. i like watchin WWE(wrestling)
Exta: im 17 my birthday is March 1, 1994 same day a justin bieber. born in san diego, ca but i live in murrieta, ca. im half filipino and half white(german, scottish, irish).
Date: 07/19/11 - 12:21 pm Title: Carside Coffee
jsdkgkjdg this is amazing! why does it not have a bajillion reviews?!!? nonsense im telling you, NONSENSE! ;) baahaha. i cant wait until you post next chappyyy. :D haha by the way on the last line- before the 'starving!' i think you meant 'the 16 year old pulled out a chair' not the 86 year old xDD thought you should know :3
eh, i guess why not. ill apply x)
itd be my honour. :'D
full name: celia velez ortega. (velez ortega are my last names- i have no middle name. spanish thing i spose. xD)
description: well, i have dark brown wavy hair that reaches just under my boobs :L, light brown eyes, olive skin :3 im 1.59/5'3 and pretty skinny i suppose. im not bootilicious, but i have the hourglass shape xD i am very outgoing, i love making people laugh- not at me- with me, im nice, friendly, bit hypocritical at times and i can get bitchy if i tried; but im generally 99.9% nice xD when you first meet me im usually shy, but once you know me i'm probably most likely one of the craziest (in a good way) person youll ever meet. im immature, but im mature when i need to be. ahah is that enough? :P ill take the silence as a yes. xD
interests: i love drawing. its my passion! but i also really enjoy singing, photography, dancing and graphic editing. i would say i love to write- but id be lying. im not a writer, im a reader. i love to read stories. when i read, i feel like for once im in someone else's shoes, not my own. :3 im addicted to music. i cannot go a day without music, or food! i love food. im not the kind of girl that eats JUST salad and all that shit. if im hungry, i can eat a whole pizza myself. (meatlovers ftw ;) ) but i have a fast metabolism so i dont get the weight, which is good because im really lazy. like MAJORLY. if this helps, chicken parmi is my fave food ;) bahaha its just amazing. i love it! i love food. as i said. haha, my favourite band is panic! at the disco, and i dont have a favourite singer. i love all kinds of music, mainly pop, reggae, techno/electronica, latin and yeh xD i LOOVEE classic rock too! <3 and i love technology. i absolutely love doing stuff on photoshop and everything x)
any extra information: well, im spanish! from madrid. :) (capital of spain- swaggalicious, i know ;) ) i basically grew up there but im currently in australia. so idk. you could say im australian but i have spanish blood- whatever sounds good :3 i speak fluent spanish. xD um... im addicted to supernatural. its my favourite tv show alongside the vampire diaries and i totally think cas in spn is a babee ;) hahah :D if youve ever watched it- I LOVE YOU! :) its amazing.
ahaha thats really long.. im sorry for the long thingy! xD
oh no, i was talking about the head chef (: