Date: 03/09/12 - 04:50 am Title: five.
Ohmygod, the last part.
The moment she asked Mr. Pratt, "Is it okay for us to still have sex?" I burst in tiny laughters, I just can't believe someone could raise the question, especially a woman.
I just so love you, I love your story and you. Can't wait to finish this story :)
Date: 08/31/11 - 07:29 pm Title: thirteen.
You're probably laughing at how much i'm reviewing hahaha.
But I thought I'd make up for not reviewing after I read the first chapter then forgot to track :)
Really loved this chapter. It's nice to see Daniel and Hazel getting along :) xx
Date: 08/31/11 - 05:58 pm Title: seven.
Aw that was cute.
You called her Bella near the beginning which I found funny haha. You probably have another story with the main character being with that name.
I love Justin in this. The jealousy, the cuteness, how protective he is and how much he cares for her. It's so cute
Date: 08/02/11 - 03:33 pm Title: fourteen.
I have zero compliments left, Ari, seriously. However, I thought the ending was adorable. It saddens me that you're putting the story on pause, but I understand why and would probably do the same if I were you. I'm going to miss reading these amazing chapters though! Enjoy the rest of your summer!
Well, Erin, that means a lot. Seriously. You've been such a faithful reader/reviewer by putting your thoughts about the story out in every chapter that I've written.
As for the story being on paused, it's just for the best for me and I'm glad you understand.
And I will do, you do the same as well!
Date: 08/02/11 - 07:37 am Title: fourteen.
Another amazing chapter. I must say that you are really good at writing and I love your style. I fell in love with your story right when I started reading it. Not gonna lie - I'm upset that you won't be writing for a while but I understand and I hope you enjoy the last days of your holiday and have an amazing school year.
Wow, thank you for that review. It made me smile, I love reviews like that. (;
I'm glad you like my style of writing and story!
And thank you for understanding, it really means a lot, although people are upset.. it's for the best for me at this time. Hopefully soon I can write again. (:
Date: 08/01/11 - 05:59 pm Title: fourteen.
aww, they're soo cute! (:
& i understand.
school's important. lol.
can't wait for the next one. (:
Haha , they are, aren't they? (;
And thanks for understanding, it means a lot.
Thanks for reviewing! <3