Date: 06/29/11 - 07:32 am Title: Chapter 2
im confused soo kaylie was dumped by justin? wat's with this "house warming" party.. wat's it for??
Yup. Kaylie was dumped by Justin, and the house warming party is Justin & Selena having a house warming meaning they are getting a house..
Date: 06/27/11 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
I forgot, i love the first quote yo uahd in the first chapter, Countiue, justin is so evilly smart, getting a house is kind of pathetic since their like 17, and yeep, :)
Thanks! And in the story, Justin is 18 and Selena is 21 (hahaha) and Kaylie is 17.
I might point that out for in the forth chapter.
Thank you for the review! <3
Date: 06/27/11 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hey, I think this is good so far, but I feel as if the events that took place in the three chapters could have been written into one.
I know you probably get excited when you write a good bit, and want to put it up straight away. I get like that too sometimes.
But I know people appreciate long chapters with substance. So, be a little more patient and write full length chapters :) Develop your idea, because it really is great so far, and you're an awesome writer.
Lmfao I know, my chapters are tiny. as in really short.
Buuuuuuuut, I get lazy. And I just write stuff on the top of my head, and I just write whatever my hands make me write. So when i have no ideas, i just post it. Lol.
I know, its annoying. :)
BUT THANK YOU. ;) Thank you for the review. So I guess I'll have to write more than 1000 huh? Okay. :) Aight. Thanks!